LOVE LAUGHTER AND BOISTEROUS POETRY REVOLVERS COCKED

GHOST WAS BUSY SCRIBBLING THE WORD “RESCUE”

TELEVISION SUGGESTED A MORE TOLERANT VIEW

MUSCULAR LOVE WAS ALMOST OKAY

ADULT “PLAY HOUSE” APPETITES

LACKING ONLY GENERATIVE-VEGETATIVE ASPECTS

TO BEGIN ALL OVER AGAIN TO CORRECT THE BLURRED

LOVE LAUGHTER AND BOISTEROUS POETRY REVOLVERS COCKED

 

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"EVERYWHERE I LOOK I SEE IMITATIONS OF THE REAL THING"

Posted on April 28, 2013, in Uncategorized and tagged , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 2 Comments.

  1. Absolutely genius. Am I getting repetitious? Adult “play house” appetites… makes the brain go in circles for a while like getting sucked down a drain in a gold sink filled with Crown Royal.

  2. All right, I did think about this again… I’m afraid my repetitious praise, while well-justified, is becoming redundant at this point. I would like to point out that you should and must wrap this ghost figure into some prose, something short but delicate, something stringy between the teeth. Maybe that’s not to be, but a guy can dream can’t he. Well. Can’t he? Sick poetry chops such as yours should not be squandered on poetry, you know.

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