LOVE LAUGHTER AND BOISTEROUS POETRY REVOLVERS COCKED
GHOST WAS BUSY SCRIBBLING THE WORD “RESCUE”
TELEVISION SUGGESTED A MORE TOLERANT VIEW
MUSCULAR LOVE WAS ALMOST OKAY
ADULT “PLAY HOUSE” APPETITES
LACKING ONLY GENERATIVE-VEGETATIVE ASPECTS
TO BEGIN ALL OVER AGAIN TO CORRECT THE BLURRED
LOVE LAUGHTER AND BOISTEROUS POETRY REVOLVERS COCKED
Posted on April 28, 2013, in Uncategorized and tagged ART, BEHAVIOR, creative writing, GENERATIVE-VEGETATIVE ASPECTS, LIFESTYLE, POEM, POETRY, RANDOM, WRITING. Bookmark the permalink. 2 Comments.
multiplemichael 
Absolutely genius. Am I getting repetitious? Adult “play house” appetites… makes the brain go in circles for a while like getting sucked down a drain in a gold sink filled with Crown Royal.
All right, I did think about this again… I’m afraid my repetitious praise, while well-justified, is becoming redundant at this point. I would like to point out that you should and must wrap this ghost figure into some prose, something short but delicate, something stringy between the teeth. Maybe that’s not to be, but a guy can dream can’t he. Well. Can’t he? Sick poetry chops such as yours should not be squandered on poetry, you know.