I STAND ASHAMED FOR YOU
PLEASE WRITE NO MORE POETRY ABOUT SELF-MURDER
THE IMAGES OF SOUVENIRS YOU’VE STOLEN
I DON’T EVEN KNOW WHAT A FIRST PERSON PLURAL IS
POSSIBLY JUST WHACKED-OUT GIRLS AT TRUCK-STOPS
YOUR REHEARSALS OF THE ACT, YOUR ONLY AVAILABLE EXALTATION ?
A SUCCESSION OF EROTIC WOUNDS, LURID AND PROPORTIONAL
I ARGUE YOU NOT TO NARROW, I STAND ASHAMED FOR YOU
Posted on February 21, 2014, in Uncategorized and tagged automatic writing, creative writing, FREE VERSE POETRY, POEMS, POETRY, psychic poetry, RANDOM, WORDS, WRITING. Bookmark the permalink. 7 Comments.
There are so many blogs that use racism as a way to get attention. Then you have weak poetry masquerading as art. I would rather hear the complaint straight up than some sophomoric attempt at art.
Are you slagging this poem, or something else? It’s hard to tell.
I was not slagging you at all. My reference to bad poems was a general thing to many blogs where it seems to be all about them.
No, I am not the author, I’m a fan of the author.
Thanks for the clarification. Yes, bad poetry abounds, I’m afraid. But there is some good stuff out there, like MM.
I am working on some black history stuff that is unique on many levels
I like. Like.
Nice thoughts.